Thursday, October 1, 2009

Matt E.

In "The Lady or the Tiger" the princess values that the boy of her dreams is safe because he is the boy of her dreams.



Revised: In "The Lady or the Tiger" the princess values that the boy of her dreams is safe because she likes him to much to watch him die.





I learned to add more at the beginning and to think about more descriptive verbs to use.

3 comments:

  1. good job, but would the safety of the boy be her own value?

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  2. nice job matt! i want you to add more!!

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  3. You are wrong. If she valued him she would rather him live. *And at no point in the story was there any refference to a boy. He was her lover. *= just kidding

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