The princess values the people who love her and the attention she gets.
Revise: The princess in the the Lady and the Tiger values her lover even though she may have led him to his death.
I learned to keep you topic sentences more open to detail for better writing through out a page.
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The princess in the "Lady or the Tiger"was described as semi barbaric, so she would rather see her lover die than see him with another woman that she hated.
ReplyDeletei agree that the princess values the people who lover her and the attention that she gets, but you might want to go into more depth and explain why she values this.
ReplyDeleteTrue but how much attention does she get? and would she love it? but other wise its good!!!!
ReplyDeleteIts a good topic sentence, unfortunately you couldn't continue and explain why she values the people who love her and the attention she gets. Overall good.
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