Thursday, October 1, 2009

Drew E!

In the Lady or the Tiger, I think that the princess values her own happiness the most. This is because she would rather have the love of her life die, than watch him be with another woman. What a Meanie!

Revised: In the Lady or the Tiger, I think that the princess values her own happiness the most, because she would rather have the love of her life die, than watch him be with another woman.

I learned that i should follow instructions better. Because at first, i didn't, and i wrote the sentence incorrectly.

6 comments:

  1. I think that you are right by the way you put it. I think that you could add more on to your sentence

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  2. good job, but make sure it is one scentence

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  3. That is a good point. She is a jerk. I think she would at least want him to live. She is a jerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrk.

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