Friday, October 2, 2009

the lady or the tiger :)

In "The Lady or the Tiger" a semi-barbaric princess is forced to choose her lovers fate. He could be eaten alive by a tiger or married to a beautiful woman just by picking a door. Considering the princess is very jealous of the woman that was behind the "lucky" door the princess was more likely to pick the door with the tiger.

3 comments:

  1. its good but you might want to give some proof of why the story was semi-barbaric

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  2. I like how you stated your opinion, maybe try a "grabber" for the first few words.

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  3. Great job!!:) maybe you could add a little more about the princesses values:)

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