Thursday, October 1, 2009

The Lady or the Tiger Topic scentence

In the short story The Lady or the Tiger the princess values many things, but I believe the thing she values most is her lover.

Revised: In the short story The Lady or the Tiger the princess could value justice, her father,or her lover, but the thing she values most? Her lover.

What I learned: From the comments I didn't really learn much. Sorry but they were just complements and questions nothing too helpful. but thanks for the input.

3 comments:

  1. Good! I like very much short and to the point, I think its better than mine

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  2. why do you think she values er lover if she might of let her die.

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  3. She definitely values her lover, but does she do anything significant to signify this?

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