In the story "The lady or the tiger" by Frank Stockton the princess most values her lover because she does not want him to get eatin by the tiger. She would rather see him with another girl than eatin by the tiger
Revised: In the story " The lady or the tiger", the princess most values her lover because she does not want him to be with the other women. Although, She does not want to loose her lover, she would prefer her lover with the other women over him being eaten by the tiger.
revised the final time: In the story " The lady or the tiger", the princess most values her lover because she does not want to loose her lover but she would prefer her lover with the other women than him being eaten by the tiger.
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Good Job, I think you just need to choose betteer words and not repeat yoursself so much
ReplyDeleteThats a really good topic sentance! i really like it = )
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