Princesses are looked upon as royal, respected, and valuable. The princess in "The Lady or the Tiger" most values herself because she would rather see her lover eaten alive then watch him be married to another girl.
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Princesses are looked upon as royal, respected, and valuable. The princess in "The Lady or the Tiger" most values herself because she would rather see her lover eaten alive then watch him be married to another girl. This princess, like her father, is semi-barbaric which also contributes to her vile decision.
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I learned that it is always acceptable to use more detail.
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