The princess values trust the most because she knew that her lover would trust her to guide him to the correct door.
Revised; The slightly barbaric princess values trust the most because she knew that her condemned loved would trust her to guide him to the better of the two fates.
I learned that i should not just summarize the story, but i should also tell my thoughts about it so it can be more detailed. I also need to have a very interesting opening line to pull readers into my story.
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That's good topic sentence, but try and add maybe one more value of the princess.
ReplyDeleteThis is good but try to make it more exciting.
ReplyDeletetry to get a better attention getter and add to it
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