In the story The Lady and the tiger, a princess makes a choice between life or love; her love was more important because she could not stand not being with her love.
Revised: In the story The Lady and tiger a semi-barbaric princess has to make the decision between a live and her personal love; her love was more important to her, she couldn't stand being separated from her love.
What I learned: I learned that I needed to clarify a bit more than what I had originally. I also have to put a few more small words in my sentences like: a, and, to, or but.
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why would she be his lover and not stand him
ReplyDeleteI agree with you completely but what makes her not stand to be away from her love?
ReplyDeleteya true that. but that last part didnt make sense... whatev.
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