Thursday, October 1, 2009

The Lady or the Tiger Topic Sentence

The princess values the power of a woman's will because she had brought the secret to the prince and who was behind the door, the lady or the tiger?



REVISE:


In the short story, "The Lady or the Tiger" the princess values her instinct because even though opened the door with the tiger here, she couldn't stand the prince with another women.


What did i learn?

I learned that its okay not to learn, because i did not learn anything.
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3 comments:

  1. Jason LOctober 2, 2009 at 11:38 AM

    Try and make the sentence sound more fluent and clear.

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  2. meganlOctober 2, 2009 at 11:40 AM

    Yours is good but its gets kinda confusing. Make it more clear.

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  3. petermOctober 2, 2009 at 11:53 AM

    try to give a bit of background knowledge because if you just say that the reader will be like what are they talking about

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