tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7004762800098708599.post750822886744365788..comments2023-03-24T02:32:22.616-07:00Comments on Trotter's Writing Eng 9 (6): topic sentence meganlGreg Thttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00268982529342504769noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7004762800098708599.post-64741289400522753822009-10-02T11:59:32.529-07:002009-10-02T11:59:32.529-07:00try to give a bit of background knowledge because...try to give a bit of background knowledge because if you just say that the reader will be like what are they talking about except for something about a princesspetermhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01623183993397371746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7004762800098708599.post-22675119899220436992009-10-02T11:45:55.290-07:002009-10-02T11:45:55.290-07:00I obvious that the princess meant her right, try a...I obvious that the princess meant her right, try and change it around a littleJason Lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10349744312532180028noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7004762800098708599.post-8524560666631049022009-10-02T11:36:37.343-07:002009-10-02T11:36:37.343-07:00it could have gone either way but good point. add ...it could have gone either way but good point. add one more thing the princess values.Pierce M!https://www.blogger.com/profile/02530342660002277964noreply@blogger.com