tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7004762800098708599.post6025030323298219369..comments2023-03-24T02:32:22.616-07:00Comments on Trotter's Writing Eng 9 (6): The Lady or the Tiger Topic SentenceGreg Thttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00268982529342504769noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7004762800098708599.post-1779763380115703752009-10-02T11:53:36.017-07:002009-10-02T11:53:36.017-07:00try to give a bit of background knowledge because...try to give a bit of background knowledge because if you just say that the reader will be like what are they talking aboutpetermhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01623183993397371746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7004762800098708599.post-82039910907703681042009-10-02T11:40:36.257-07:002009-10-02T11:40:36.257-07:00Yours is good but its gets kinda confusing. Make i...Yours is good but its gets kinda confusing. Make it more clear.meganlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10470344927133905933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7004762800098708599.post-74986584324715653312009-10-02T11:38:52.270-07:002009-10-02T11:38:52.270-07:00Try and make the sentence sound more fluent and cl...Try and make the sentence sound more fluent and clear.Jason Lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10349744312532180028noreply@blogger.com