tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7004762800098708599.post3278735509586599009..comments2023-03-24T02:32:22.616-07:00Comments on Trotter's Writing Eng 9 (6): SaSha M topiic sentenceGreg Thttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00268982529342504769noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7004762800098708599.post-7043523662110602762009-10-02T12:02:54.987-07:002009-10-02T12:02:54.987-07:00MUCH better, this is a great topic sentence, much ...MUCH better, this is a great topic sentence, much much better, I think that this leaves the reader questioning and wondering and wanting to read more... Great job SashaPeyton M.https://www.blogger.com/profile/09151886686583226389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7004762800098708599.post-14000632676265335142009-10-02T11:47:53.471-07:002009-10-02T11:47:53.471-07:00It sounds like you understand what was going on wi...It sounds like you understand what was going on with the princess and i agree with what you said.yo2jodyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07189348543072412897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7004762800098708599.post-14074573949096602032009-10-02T11:39:24.846-07:002009-10-02T11:39:24.846-07:00i would say just add more information to it, less ...i would say just add more information to it, less then mine but a bit more then yours then explain it more, other then that i would say you've got it :)Peyton M.https://www.blogger.com/profile/09151886686583226389noreply@blogger.com