Thursday, October 1, 2009

Drew E!

In the Lady or the Tiger, I think that the princess values her own happiness the most. This is because she would rather have the love of her life die, than watch him be with another woman. What a Meanie!

Revised: In the Lady or the Tiger, I think that the princess values her own happiness the most, because she would rather have the love of her life die, than watch him be with another woman.

I learned that i should follow instructions better. Because at first, i didn't, and i wrote the sentence incorrectly.

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